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Tuesday, March 26, 2013

Portfolio Project

For my portfolio project i  chose my literacy analysis. I chose this project because i saw small changes that i could make to make it a better paper over all. I also like writing this paper. This made me want to revisit it.

Also i saw many comments that said i'm confused and that is something i would like to change. This topic i wrote about i thought was a great one and one that i though could use a little more elaboration. This Paper will be the most polished one i have done all year.

2 comments:

  1. What was your topic? Having an interesting topic can make the writing experience change drastically. For example, I disliked my literary analysis, but liked my research paper.

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  2. Cameron, I'm still not sure at the end of this which paper you are talking about: the literacy narrative or the literary analysis? This speaks to the need to address clarity issues overall in your writing and to edit carefully. This post does not meet basic requirements for class-related writing. You need to use standard capitalization and develop your writing more (five sentences per paragraph is a good minimum).

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